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Fate worse than this by ~InsatiableAddict:iconInsatiableAddict:

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To have never loved,
for fear your heart be broken.
To have feelings thereof,
never realized, unspoken
I'm a victim of,
a fate worse than this.

You forsake me.
You break me.
By taking,
your kiss.

A breeze without scent,
a sun without shine.
I can't recall how time's spent,
since you're no longer mine.
I'm forced to lament,
about a fate worse than this.

You forsake me.
You break me.
By taking,
your kiss.

I've been hungry and cheated,
beaten and more.
My resolve is depleted,
I can't win this war.
I'm soundly defeated,
by a fate worse than this.

You forsake me.
You break me.
By taking,
your kiss.

You said it was forever,
like a fool I believed.
But our bonds you did sever,
and laughed as I grieved.
I know I could never,
have met a fate worse than this.

You forsake me.
You break me.
By taking,
your kiss.
©2008-2009 ~InsatiableAddict
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~penguintypelove:iconpenguintypelove: Apr 16, 2008, 5:07:09 PM
I like it,
I think I can relayte to it.
<3

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~BrokenLovePoet:iconBrokenLovePoet: Apr 18, 2008, 5:25:20 AM
a poem that so fits my last relationship

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True poets are true prophets, sent
To scatter fear through wicked lands; —
Take thy commission by descent,
With prayer, and laying on of hands !
~Book of The Dead~
~deadrosesgrow:icondeadrosesgrow: Apr 18, 2008, 9:25:09 AM
wow i know we are all going to say this but mine never laughed but my wounds arnt very old so this is one that stings.

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Black rose your thorns are cutting into me
Every time I held you I knew that it would hurt
Black rose your thorns are cutting into me for the last time
~InsatiableAddict:iconInsatiableAddict: Apr 18, 2008, 11:00:54 AM
I'm sorry to hear that you're still hurting. I hope you're able to move on soon.

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~deadrosesgrow:icondeadrosesgrow: Apr 18, 2008, 8:45:57 PM
they say it takes as long as u were together to get over them and i guess if they arnt going away how can u.and they still call and say they love u and kiss u ugh.so i guess i have a yr and a month and if he dosnt go away and let me grieve in utter misery i dont know.

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Black rose your thorns are cutting into me
Every time I held you I knew that it would hurt
Black rose your thorns are cutting into me for the last time
=RavensDarkAngel77:iconRavensDarkAngel77: Apr 21, 2008, 6:32:04 PM
Wow that is amazing hun.....You have such depth of emotion in this..It could even be a song.

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